Travel Essay

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- Time to go.

Seconds, Time is also a problem that independent travel will feel free to decide with their own trip. They can travel whenever they want, and make the trip longer or shorter depends on their own plan, their ideas, and also their emotional. That's an advantage thing for them.

- The strength of trip.

Thirds, independent travel can get the knowledge and self-evaluable after the trip by themself, such as what they did, what they should improve on their weakness, what they are good at, and how they solve or face to face with the problems on the trip,... Independent travel can get strength of trip from those things because they got lessons and learned a lot of good things for themselve.

Concluding sentence for first subject and transition into next subject.

Although taking independent travel give people many advantages, some people prefer to join with a group for other reasons.

BODY PARAGRAPH 2 – Topic sentence: state second subject.

On the other hand, there may be cost saving that is an important reason people choose group travel.

Supporting evidence for the second subject.

- Transportation

Firstly, with group travel, people can easy to get transportation for the trip with cheap price, and high quality. The most popular transportations for a group are train and bus that they can get the good deal and good service. People can have a ride in comfortable and safety. Also, they can avoid the Hassel of searching for parking. That will be help people to save their time to enjoy the trip. However, it’s not convenience for group travel to choose transportation in high level. People cannot choose high-level transportation with the good deal for airplane or others.

- Hotel

Secondly, there are a lot of good deals with Hotel for group travel. People can get the best rate that can include breakfast, spa, and many benefits in hotel service. Group travel bring to people comfortable feeling and happy when they can stay in high quality Hotel with cheap price and good service.

- Meals :

Thirdly, with some group travel that organize by family or friend, and don’t have tourism, they can make their meal even cheaper and get a lot of happiness around that time. For example, my family organizes a trip by ourselves with twenty people and we make a trip in one week. We decided to rent a big house and made our own meals. The cost we spend was cheaper than a price that we saw at Tourist Agencies. In addition, we spend a lot of happy time together and those are the memories will stay forever in our heart. That is the best value we got more than a trip.

Concluding sentence for the second point of comparison.

Taking group travel is the best way to save money. In addition, the best thing that people can get from group travel is the happy moments when they are together.

CONCLUSION

– Summary of how the two subjects compare according to the points of comparison.

There are some advantages and disadvantage of both kind of these travel. It is about costing and making plan to go. Taking group travel help people save money, but they are not always free to decide a plan for the trip.

– Recommendations in favour of one of the subjects.

Traveling in a group doesn’t only enable you to know your friends and family better, it also give you many opportunities to get to know people from around the world.

– Memorable statement

There are many ‘’ must see” in the world to visit, doesn’t matter the way we go. Let’s go and discover.