Rre Essay

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There are also some noticeable misspelled words and some sentence fragments throughout this paper. It’s a lot of basic mistakes that can easily be fixed if you re-read the paper and use spellcheck. For example, in the third paragraph you wrote boo-ing instead of just booing, and in the fourth paragraph you wrote fell instead of feel. Specifics throughout the paragraph might not make much sense right now or help much, but just make sure to use spellcheck and make some basic changes. Also in the fourth and final paragraph you refer to Ohio State as OSU. Throughout the paragraph before this point you always refer to Ohio State by the full name; although I completely understand what you’re saying, another reader might be confused with this. This abbreviation is just a really easy change and I just would change it to avoid the confusing.

Finally, don’t forget to add a title. I understand that this is a rough draft, but don’t forget to add a relevant and captivating title before submitting the paper. Titles the very important and it would be a major mistake to forget to make the change.

I find your argument very interesting and eye-opening. Your argument is very descriptive and has a lot of personal examples that can engage the reader and make personal connections to their life. I also found you article to have a very appropriate timing with Ohio State hosting Martin Garrix for it’s spring concert this Friday (April 22). After reading your article I will now be aware of this idea and probably see it at full display this Friday. Just make sure to clarify some points, get rid of some filler, and fix some easy grammar mistakes. I hope my suggestions were helpful and my long report wasn’t intimidating (I naturally tend to write a lot). I wish you the best of luck with your revisions and your final RRE.

Sincerely,

Your Peer Reviewer